I am proud of this Native American Origin Myth because it sounds mystical like an authentic one would.  I feel that the topic I wrote this myth about was well thought out and that the story turned out well.  I am also proud of it because the next day when we divided into groups and picked out the best one in each group mine was chosen.  Then when we read the chosen ones allowed it was selected to be the one that sounded most like a Native American Myth.  I received a good grade on this myth, which also made me feel proud.  The only things that needed improvement were the conventions.  The errors were mostly comma errors.